Song of Solomon

Name of Book and Location in Canon

The Song of Solomon (its Hebrew title is “Song of Songs”), also known as Canticles, appears in the Megillot, or “five scrolls” (Ruth, Song of Songs, Ecclesiastes, Lamentations, Esther), in the third part of the Jewish canon, the Writings. In the Christian canon it is among the Poetical and Wisdom books.

Authorship, Date of Composition, Literary and Historical Context

The Song of Solomon, the Bible's only love poem, offers no clues about when, where, or under what circumstances it was composed. Its author is unknown. The traditional attribution of the book to Solomon probably derives from references to Solomon in the poem (1.5; 3.7,9,11; 8.11,12) and his reputation as the composer of songs (1 Kings 4.32) and owner of a large harem (1 Kings 11.3).

Speculation about the date of composition ranges from the time of Solomon (tenth century bce) to the Hellenistic period (fourth to second centuries bce). Some scholars see the Song as a collection, in which case the various love poems would come from different authors and different times.

Similarities to Mesopotamian (3000–1000 bce) and, in particular, Egyptian love poetry (thirteenth to eleventh centuries bce) indicate that the poet drew upon a rich cultural tradition of love poetry. Shared features include wishing, desiring, praising the beloved, metaphoric descriptions of the body, double entendre, nature imagery, and the appeal to the senses. Sometimes a dialogue format is used; frequently the lovers address each other as “sister” and “brother.” Many of the Mesopotamian love poems deal with the marriage of the goddess and her consort and were used in ritual contexts. In contrast, the Song, like the Egyptian love poems, is not about gods nor does it appear to have had anything to do with worship.

Structure and Contents

The Song is about how glorious it is to be in love. It looks at love from both a woman's and a man's point of view, and it consists entirely of dialogue, so that we learn about love through what lovers say about it. The dialogue format creates the impression that we are overhearing the lovers as they speak, and observing their love unfold. The poet seeks to immortalize a vision of love as “strong as death” (8.6) by portraying the lovers as forever seeking and finding gratification of their mutual desire. They delight in each other and in the sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and tangibility of the world around them, making the Song a feast for the senses.

A third speaking voice belongs to the women of Jerusalem, a kind of chorus functioning as an audience within the poem and whose presence, because the lovers are aware of and encourage it, facilitates the reader's entry into the lovers’ seemingly private world of erotic intimacy.

The poem begins and ends with short speeches in which the speakers change frequently, and the voices of the woman, the man, and, occasionally, the women of Jerusalem intermingle (1.2–2.7; 8.1–14). In between—although the structure is not rigid—are two cycles of long speeches, in which the woman speaks, then the man, with the woman interrupting his speeches at the end (2.8–3.11 and 4.1–5.1; 5.2–6.3 and 6.4–7.13).

Interpretation

Allegory was the dominant mode of interpretation from the early centuries of the Common Era until the rise of critical biblical scholarship in the nineteenth century. Jewish interpreters typically read the Song as an account of the relationship between God and Israel, while Christians saw it as about the love between Christ and the church, or Christ (or the divine logos) and the individual believer. Modern scholars recognize its subject as human love, though some have argued that it originated as a liturgical text whose speakers are a god and goddess. Whether the Song was included in the canon because it had been allegorized or was allegorized because it had been included in the canon has long been debated. Allegorization alone cannot have been the reason the Song was included, since the text must have already achieved a certain status—perhaps as part of the national religious literature—for anyone to have taken the trouble to develop an allegorical interpretation of it.

The Song is a lyric poem, not a record of events in the lives of two lovers. This means that unusual events or sudden transitions do not require explanation to make them seem more realistic or more intelligible. When we read lyric poetry, which is essentially a discontinuous form, we should not expect to find the kind of linear unfolding of events that produces a plot. The Song meanders, repeating themes, images, phrases, and sometimes whole sections. As we read the poem, we may feel that we get to know the lovers, for they each have their own distinctive way of talking about their love and its effect on them. She is lovesick (2.5; 5.8), and she tells stories in which he comes to court her and she searches for him (2.8–17; 3.1–5; 5.2–8). He is overwhelmed by her (4.9; 6.5), and praises her charms in detail (4.1–15; 6.4–10; 7.1–9). Yet even as we build a picture of them, we need to recognize that the woman and the man are personae created by the poet to represent all lovers. They appear in various guises—shepherds, vineyard keepers, royal figures—as well as appearing as themselves. Because they are not real lovers, their movements are not restricted. They effortlessly traverse the poetic landscape—vineyards, gardens, palaces, houses, rocky cliffs, the wilderness, Lebanon—finding pleasure wherever their fancy takes them.

Readers are meant to revel in the poem's sonorousness, rich vocabulary, and exotic images. Its dense metaphoric language and extravagant images are not reducible to simple prose paraphrase, and typically the metaphors the lovers use to describe each other's bodies hide as much as they reveal.

This is no private poem, intended for a lover's ears only. It invites its readers to participate in the wonder of love, along with the women of Jerusalem, whose presence serves as a reminder that what seems to be a closed dialogue between lovers is indeed addressed to the reader.

J. Cheryl Exum

1

The Song of Songs, which is Solomon's.

2Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth!

  For your love is better than wine,

3your anointing oils are fragrant,

  your name is perfume poured out;

therefore the maidens love you.

  4Draw me after you, let us make haste.

The king has brought me into his chambers.

  We will exult and rejoice in you;

we will extol your love more than wine;

  rightly do they love you.

5I am black and beautiful,

  O daughters of Jerusalem,

like the tents of Kedar,

  like the curtains of Solomon.

6Do not gaze at me because I am dark,

  because the sun has gazed on me.

My mother's sons were angry with me;

  they made me keeper of the vineyards,

but my own vineyard I have not kept!

7Tell me, you whom my soul loves,

  where you pasture your flock,

  where you make it lie down at noon;

for why should I be like one who is veiled

  beside the flocks of your companions?

8If you do not know,

  O fairest among women,

follow the tracks of the flock,

  and pasture your kids

  beside the shepherds’ tents.

9I compare you, my love,

  to a mare among Pharaoh's chariots.

10Your cheeks are comely with ornaments,

  your neck with strings of jewels.

11We will make you ornaments of gold,

  studded with silver.

12While the king was on his couch,

  my nard gave forth its fragrance.

13My beloved is to me a bag of myrrh

  that lies between my breasts.

14My beloved is to me a cluster of henna blossoms

  in the vineyards of En-gedi.

15Ah, you are beautiful, my love;

  ah, you are beautiful;

your eyes are doves.

16Ah, you are beautiful, my beloved,

truly lovely.

  Our couch is green;

17the beams of our house are cedar,

  our raftersa are pine.

2

I am a roseb of Sharon,

  a lily of the valleys.

2As a lily among brambles,

  so is my love among maidens.

3As an apple tree among the trees of the wood,

  so is my beloved among young men.

With great delight I sat in his shadow,

  and his fruit was sweet to my taste.

4He brought me to the banqueting house,

  and his intention toward me was love.

5Sustain me with raisins,

  refresh me with apples;

for I am faint with love.

  6O that his left hand were under my head,

and that his right hand embraced me!

7I adjure you, O daughters of Jerusalem,

  by the gazelles or the wild does:

do not stir up or awaken love

until it is ready!

8The voice of my beloved!

  Look, he comes,

leaping upon the mountains,

  bounding over the hills.

9My beloved is like a gazelle

  or a young stag.

Look, there he stands

  behind our wall,

gazing in at the windows,

  looking through the lattice.

10My beloved speaks and says to me:

  “Arise, my love, my fair one,

and come away;

11for now the winter is past,

  the rain is over and gone.

12The flowers appear on the earth;

the time of singing has come,

  and the voice of the turtledove

is heard in our land.

13The fig tree puts forth its figs,

  and the vines are in blossom;

they give forth fragrance.

Arise, my love, my fair one,

and come away.

14O my dove, in the clefts of the rock,

  in the covert of the cliff,

let me see your face,

let me hear your voice;

for your voice is sweet,

and your face is lovely.

15Catch us the foxes,

  the little foxes,

that ruin the vineyards—

for our vineyards are in blossom.”

16My beloved is mine and I am his;

  he pastures his flock among the lilies.

17Until the day breathes

  and the shadows flee,

turn, my beloved, be like a gazelle

or a young stag on the cleft mountains.a

3

Upon my bed at night

  I sought him whom my soul loves;

I sought him, but found him not;

  I called him, but he gave no answer. b

2“I will rise now and go about the city,

  in the streets and in the squares;

I will seek him whom my soul loves.”

  I sought him, but found him not.

3The sentinels found me,

  as they went about in the city.

“Have you seen him whom my soul loves?”

4Scarcely had I passed them,

  when I found him whom my soul loves.

I held him, and would not let him go

  until I brought him into my mother's house,

and into the chamber of her that conceived me.

5I adjure you, O daughters of Jerusalem,

  by the gazelles or the wild does:

do not stir up or awaken love

  until it is ready!

6What is that coming up from the wilderness,

  like a column of smoke,

perfumed with myrrh and frankincense,

  with all the fragrant powders of the merchant?

7Look, it is the litter of Solomon!

  Around it are sixty mighty men

of the mighty men of Israel,

8all equipped with swords

  and expert in war,

each with his sword at his thigh

because of alarms by night.

9King Solomon made himself a palanquin

  from the wood of Lebanon.

10He made its posts of silver,

  its back of gold, its seat of purple;

its interior was inlaid with love.a

Daughters of Jerusalem,

11come out.

  Look, O daughters of Zion,

at King Solomon,

at the crown with which his mother crowned him

on the day of his wedding,

on the day of the gladness of his heart.

4

How beautiful you are, my love,

  how very beautiful!

Your eyes are doves

behind your veil.

Your hair is like a flock of goats,

moving down the slopes of Gilead.

2Your teeth are like a flock of shorn ewes

  that have come up from the washing,

all of which bear twins,

and not one among them is bereaved.

3Your lips are like a crimson thread,

  and your mouth is lovely.

Your cheeks are like halves of a pomegranate

behind your veil.

4Your neck is like the tower of David,

  built in courses;

on it hang a thousand bucklers,

all of them shields of warriors.

5Your two breasts are like two fawns,

  twins of a gazelle,

that feed among the lilies.

6Until the day breathes

  and the shadows flee,

I will hasten to the mountain of myrrh

and the hill of frankincense.

7You are altogether beautiful, my love;

  there is no flaw in you.

8Come with me from Lebanon, my bride;

  come with me from Lebanon.

Departb from the peak of Amana,

from the peak of Senir and Hermon,

from the dens of lions,

from the mountains of leopards.

9You have ravished my heart, my sister, my bride,

  you have ravished my heart with a glance of your eyes,

with one jewel of your necklace.

10How sweet is your love, my sister, my bride!

  how much better is your love than wine,

and the fragrance of your oils than any spice!

11Your lips distill nectar, my bride;

  honey and milk are under your tongue;

the scent of your garments is like the scent of Lebanon.

12A garden locked is my sister, my bride,

  a garden locked, a fountain sealed.

13Your channela is an orchard of pomegranates

  with all choicest fruits,

henna with nard,

14nard and saffron, calamus and cinnamon,

  with all trees of frankincense,

myrrh and aloes,

with all chief spices—

15a garden fountain, a well of living water,

  and flowing streams from Lebanon.

16Awake, O north wind,

  and come, O south wind!

Blow upon my garden

that its fragrance may be wafted abroad.

Let my beloved come to his garden,

and eat its choicest fruits.

5

I come to my garden, my sister, my bride;

  I gather my myrrh with my spice,

I eat my honeycomb with my honey,

I drink my wine with my milk.

Eat, friends, drink,

and be drunk with love.

2I slept, but my heart was awake.

  Listen! my beloved is knocking.

“Open to me, my sister, my love,

my dove, my perfect one;

for my head is wet with dew,

my locks with the drops of the night.”

3I had put off my garment;

  how could I put it on again?

I had bathed my feet;

how could I soil them?

4My beloved thrust his hand into the opening,

  and my inmost being yearned for him.

5I arose to open to my beloved,

  and my hands dripped with myrrh,

my fingers with liquid myrrh,

upon the handles of the bolt.

6I opened to my beloved,

  but my beloved had turned and was gone.

My soul failed me when he spoke.

I sought him, but did not find him;

I called him, but he gave no answer.

7Making their rounds in the city

  the sentinels found me;

they beat me, they wounded me,

they took away my mantle,

those sentinels of the walls.

8I adjure you, O daughters of Jerusalem,

  if you find my beloved,

tell him this:

I am faint with love.

9What is your beloved more than another beloved,

O fairest among women?

What is your beloved more than another beloved,

that you thus adjure us?

10My beloved is all radiant and ruddy,

  distinguished among ten thousand.

11His head is the finest gold;

  his locks are wavy,

black as a raven.

12His eyes are like doves

  beside springs of water,

bathed in milk,

fitly set.a

13His cheeks are like beds of spices,

  yielding fragrance.

His lips are lilies,

distilling liquid myrrh.

14His arms are rounded gold,

  set with jewels.

His body is ivory work,a

encrusted with sapphires.b

15His legs are alabaster columns,

  set upon bases of gold.

His appearance is like Lebanon,

choice as the cedars.

16His speech is most sweet,

  and he is altogether desirable.

This is my beloved and this is my friend,

O daughters of Jerusalem.

6

Where has your beloved gone,

  O fairest among women?

Which way has your beloved turned,

that we may seek him with you?

2My beloved has gone down to his garden,

  to the beds of spices,

to pasture his flock in the gardens,

and to gather lilies.

3I am my beloved's and my beloved is mine;

  he pastures his flock among the lilies.

4You are beautiful as Tirzah, my love,

  comely as Jerusalem,

terrible as an army with banners.

5Turn away your eyes from me,

  for they overwhelm me!

Your hair is like a flock of goats,

moving down the slopes of Gilead.

6Your teeth are like a flock of ewes,

  that have come up from the washing;

all of them bear twins,

and not one among them is bereaved.

7Your cheeks are like halves of a pomegranate

  behind your veil.

8There are sixty queens and eighty concubines,

and maidens without number.

9My dove, my perfect one, is the only one,

  the darling of her mother,

flawless to her that bore her.

The maidens saw her and called her happy;

the queens and concubines also, and they praised her.

10“Who is this that looks forth like the dawn,

  fair as the moon, bright as the sun,

terrible as an army with banners?”

11I went down to the nut orchard,

  to look at the blossoms of the valley,

to see whether the vines had budded,

whether the pomegranates were in bloom.

12Before I was aware, my fancy set me

  in a chariot beside my prince.a

13bReturn, return, O Shulammite!

  Return, return, that we may look upon you.

Why should you look upon the Shulammite,

as upon a dance before two armies?c

7

How graceful are your feet in sandals,

  O queenly maiden!

Your rounded thighs are like jewels,

the work of a master hand.

2Your navel is a rounded bowl

  that never lacks mixed wine.

Your belly is a heap of wheat,

encircled with lilies.

3Your two breasts are like two fawns,

  twins of a gazelle.

4Your neck is like an ivory tower.

  Your eyes are pools in Heshbon,

by the gate of Bath-rabbim.

Your nose is like a tower of Lebanon,

overlooking Damascus.

5Your head crowns you like Carmel,

  and your flowing locks are like purple;

a king is held captive in the tresses.d

6How fair and pleasant you are,

  O loved one, delectable maiden!e

7You are statelyf as a palm tree,

  and your breasts are like its clusters.

8I say I will climb the palm tree

  and lay hold of its branches.

O may your breasts be like clusters of the vine,

and the scent of your breath like apples,

9and your kissesa like the best wine

  that goes downb smoothly,

gliding over lips and teeth.c

10I am my beloved's,

  and his desire is for me.

11Come, my beloved,

  let us go forth into the fields,

and lodge in the villages;

12let us go out early to the vineyards,

  and see whether the vines have budded,

whether the grape blossoms have opened

and the pomegranates are in bloom.

There I will give you my love.

13The mandrakes give forth fragrance,

  and over our doors are all choice fruits,

new as well as old,

which I have laid up for you, O my beloved.

8

O that you were like a brother to me,

  who nursed at my mother's breast!

If I met you outside, I would kiss you,

and no one would despise me.

2I would lead you and bring you

  into the house of my mother,

and into the chamber of the one who bore me.d

I would give you spiced wine to drink,

the juice of my pomegranates.

3O that his left hand were under my head,

  and that his right hand embraced me!

4I adjure you, O daughters of Jerusalem,

  do not stir up or awaken love

until it is ready!

5Who is that coming up from the wilderness,

  leaning upon her beloved?

Under the apple tree I awakened you.

There your mother was in labor with you;

  there she who bore you was in labor.

6Set me as a seal upon your heart,

  as a seal upon your arm;

for love is strong as death,

  passion fierce as the grave.

Its flashes are flashes of fire,

  a raging flame.

7Many waters cannot quench love,

  neither can floods drown it.

If one offered for love

  all the wealth of one's house,

  it would be utterly scorned.

8We have a little sister,

  and she has no breasts.

What shall we do for our sister,

on the day when she is spoken for?

9If she is a wall,

  we will build upon her a battlement of silver;

but if she is a door,

  we will enclose her with boards of cedar.

10I was a wall,

  and my breasts were like towers;

then I was in his eyes

  as one who bringsa peace.

11Solomon had a vineyard at Baal-hamon;

  he entrusted the vineyard to keepers;

each one was to bring for its fruit a thousand pieces of silver.

12My vineyard, my very own, is for myself;

  you, O Solomon, may have the thousand,

and the keepers of the fruit two hundred!

13O you who dwell in the gardens,

  my companions are listening for your voice;

let me hear it.

14Make haste, my beloved,

  and be like a gazelle

or a young stag

upon the mountains of spices!

1.1: Title. Song of Songs, a superlative, “the best song,” like “king of kings” (Ezek 26.7), the king above all kings; “holy of holies” (Ex 26.33), the most holy place; “vanity of vanities” (Eccl 1.2), the height of absurdity. Hebrew “shir” is a generic term for “song” or “poem.” Which is Solomon's could indicate authorship, or that Solomon is the dedicatee, or that the Song is connected with him in some way (compare the use of “of David” as an editorial superscription to many psalms).
1.2–2.7: A montage of short speeches. 1.2: The poem begins with a romantic relationship already in progress. The woman speaks about her lover as “him,” as though he were not there, then suddenly he materializes and she speaks to him of your love. Love, a plural form referring to physical lovemaking (4.10; 7.12; cf. Prov 7.18). Like wine, love is intoxicating (cf. Judg 9.13). 4: The king, i.e., the lover in his royal or Solomonic guise. Here too she speaks of him in the third person, as the king, and then in the second person “you,” as in v. 2. We, the lovers, or, more likely, the woman and the young women (NRSV, maidens) mentioned in v. 3, who are probably also the “they” at the end of v. 4. She is besotted with him and imagines that other women are similarly affected. 5–6: Black and beautiful, her dark skin, she explains, is due to exposure to the sun while working in the vineyards. 5: Daughters of Jerusalem, the female inhabitants of Jerusalem (cf. “sons of Israel” for Israelites). Kedar, a northern Arabian tribe whose name means “dark.” 6: No reason is given for the brothers’ anger nor is any further reference made to it. My own vineyard refers to the woman herself, probably with a sexual meaning, as also in 8.12. 7–8: The lovers appear in the guise of shepherds. 7: Pasture your flock, there is no term for flock in the Hebrew, which reads, “Where do you graze?” This is one of many instances of double entendre in the Song: the man grazes or feeds among the lilies and in the gardens, figures for the woman herself (2.1–2; 4.12–5.1; see also 2.16 and 6.2–3, where NRSV also inserts “flock”). Veiled could refer to a disguise, or, better, read “one who wanders,” with some ancient versions. 8: Spoken either by the man or by the women of Jerusalem, who elsewhere address the woman as “fairest among women” (5.9; 6.1). 9–11: The man compares his beloved to a fine horse, a common form of praise in antiquity. 11: He will have the work done, without specifying who will do it (though possibly “we” could be the lovers or the man and the women of Jerusalem). 12–14: The woman speaks of her beloved as the king, as in 1.4. The fragrance of nard and myrrh, costly aromatics, blend with the natural scent of henna blossoms, which are strongly scented and grow in dense clusters. En-gedi, an oasis on the western shore of the Dead Sea. 1.15–2.3: Mutual adoration. The man (v. 15) and the woman (vv. 16–17) praise each other in similar terms. She compares herself to flowers we cannot identify with certainty (2.1). He turns her self-description into a compliment (v. 2), which she returns in a way that echoes his words (v. 3). Sharon, either the coastal plain between Jaffa and Mount Carmel or simply “the plain.” 2.4: Banqueting house, lit., “house of wine,” where the lovers dwell in their mutual intoxication. 5–7: The woman addresses the women of Jerusalem. Faint with love, lovesickness, for which the cause, love, is also the cure. 6: Either a wish or a statement of fact; see 8.3. 7: See 3.5; 8.4. This resembles a conventional way of swearing an oath but lacks the solemnity: the word for “gazelles” looks and sounds like the word for “hosts” in the name “Lord of Hosts,” and Hebrew “ʾaylot hassadeh” (“wild does”) recalls the divine name El Shaddai. Love is personified as something that has a will of its own.
2.8–3.11: The woman's first long speech. The woman's primary mode of speaking about love is to tell stories in which she and her lover are characters. As stories, these parts of the Song, unlike the poem as a whole, have plots. Here she tells three. 2.8–17: The first describes the man's visit to her house and his invitation to her to join him outdoors to enjoy the springtime. The voice of my beloved, better, “Listen! My lover!” “Listen” and look create the impression of immediacy. His movements are captured in process as he draws closer: leaping and bounding, then standing and gazing. 11: Winter, the rainy season. 12: Time of singing may also be read as “time of pruning.” 14: She seems inaccessible, perhaps also shy and hesitant. 15–17: She answers his request to hear her voice. Foxes and vineyards, young men and young women. In v. 15 she speaks for women in general; in v. 16, about her relationship with her lover, which is exclusive and mutual. 17: Until the day breathes and the shadows flee could refer to either evening or morning. Whereas she seems to be saying that the time has come for her lover to return, over the mountains, from which he came (v. 8), cleft mountains (or emend to “mountains of spices” as in 8.14) alludes to the woman herself and the various pleasures her body offers, perhaps her breasts (see 4.5–6). 3.1–5: In her second story, she describes her nocturnal search for her beloved and its resolution when she finds him. 5: See 2.7; 8.4. 3.6–11: Her third story. A luxurious conveyance approaches, bearing her lover, whom she casts in the role of King Solomon on his wedding day. 6: Coming up, the procession is in motion. First it looks like a column of smoke. Next comes an appeal to the sense of smell created by the fragrant aromas of myrrh and frankincense, suggesting that what is approaching from the distance might be a caravan laden with fragrant powders of the merchant. 7–8: Look, now the source of the smoke and the fragrance can be seen, a litter or palanquin (v. 9), an enclosed chair or couch carried by bearers, surrounded by an armed escort. 9–10: The trappings of the magnificent palanquin progressively come into view. Love is not a material for decorating, like wood, silver, gold, and purple, and should be emended to “precious stones” or “ebony” or “leather.”
4.1–5.1: The man's first long speech. The man's mode of speaking about love is to look at his lover, tell her what he sees and how it affects him. 4.1–5: He describes parts of her body, using similes and metaphors. 1: Goats, moving down the slopes, flowing tresses of wavy black hair (goats were commonly black or dark colored). Gilead, a hilly region in northern Jordan. 2: Teeth, white and evenly paired, with none missing. 3: Cheeks, halves of a pomegranate, perhaps rosy cheeks glimpsed through a white mesh veil. 4: The image suggests a neck adorned with a necklace made up of several rows of beads. Tower of David evokes her regal quality; no such tower is known. 5: Elsewhere the man is described as feeding among the lilies, an erotically suggestive image in which the lilies signify the woman (2.16; 6.2–3). 6: He responds to her exhortation of 2.17. Mountain of myrrh, hill of frankincense, the woman's breasts, the woman herself, and the place where the lovers enjoy love's pleasures. 8: Bride, here and v. 11, and “my sister, my bride” (4.9,10,12; 5.1) are terms of endearment. Amana, Senir, and Hermon, peaks in the Anti-Lebanon mountain range, north of Israel, where lions and leopards make their dens, create a contrast to the accessible mountains of v. 6 and symbolize the woman's inaccessibility and the awe she inspires in him. 9: Ravished, either “stirred my heart” or “captured my heart.” He speaks of love in terms of conquest, describing his feeling of being overwhelmed by her as something she has done to him. 11: The scent of Lebanon, i.e., the fragrant cedars. 4.12–5.1: A cluster of metaphors creates a picture of his lover as a fragrant garden, full of edible delights. 4.12: Garden locked, his private garden for his exclusive pleasure. 13–15: She is a paradisiacal garden, where exotic spice-bearing plants and trees from such faraway places as Arabia, Africa, and India grow side by side. 16: The woman interrupts him, first inviting the winds into her garden to whet the man's appetite by stirring up its sweet smells, then inviting her lover to an erotic banquet. 5.1: Eating and drinking are symbols of sexual intimacy. Eat, friends, the women of Jerusalem encourage the lovers in their mutual intoxication.
5.2–6.3: The woman's second long speech. Again the woman tells of a visit by the man followed by her search for him in the city streets at night. A dialogue with the women of Jerusalem enables her story to reach the desired outcome, union with her lover. 5.2–8: See 3.1–5. Her story is replete with sexual allusions. 5.2: I slept, but my heart was awake, a light sleep, in which the woman, desiring or anticipating her lover's visit, is half-listening for his voice. 3: Either an explanation for her delay, addressed to the women of Jerusalem, or a playful reply to her lover (“I have put off my garment”). 5. Myrrh, with which the woman had anointed herself, or perfumed her bed (Prov 7.17), or both. 6: My soul failed me (lit., “went forth”) may refer to swooning or fainting (cf. the similar expression used of dying, Gen 35.18; Ps 146.4). When he spoke, better translated, “because of him” or “when he left.” 7: A forceful reminder of the perils of love, or of the willingness of love to suffer. No justification is given for the woman's harsh treatment at the hands of the sentinels, and the verse is ambiguous regarding the severity of their attack. 5.9–6.3: The women of Jerusalem's questions and the woman's answers reveal that they are not taking the search too seriously. 9: They ask what is so special about him. 10–16: She answers by praising him, thereby evoking his presence. The images are intimate and erotically suggestive. 10: Radiant and ruddy, a sign of health, youthfulness, and beauty (Ps 104.15; 1 Sam 16.12; 17.42; Lam 4.7). 12: Doves in pellucid pools, as though bathed in milk, evoke the pupil and iris surrounded by the wet milky whiteness of the eye. 14–16: Her description of his statuesque body made of strong and precious materials expresses his value to her. 16: His speech (lit., “his palate”), better, “his mouth,” since she is describing his physical attributes. My friend, her only use of a term of endearment he uses frequently of her (1.9,15; 2.2,10,13; 4.1,7; 5.2; 6.4, where NRSV translates, “my love”). 6.1: The playfulness of the dialogue is obvious, since, if she knows where he has gone, she needs no help to find him. 2–3: She knows where he is. The garden represents both the woman and the setting for lovemaking. Grazing in the gardens and among the lilies are double entendres for erotic play (see 1.7n.).
6.4–7.9: The man's second long speech. Again the man describes the woman's charms in similes and metaphors. 6.4: Tirzah, capital of the Northern Kingdom of Israel ca. 920–880 bce. Terrible as an army with banners, more likely the Hebrew means “as awesome in splendor as they,” i.e., Jerusalem and Tirzah in this verse; the moon and the sun in v. 10. 5a: They overwhelm me, he describes the way he feels as something she has done to him (cf. 4.9). 5b–7: See 4.1–3n. 9–10: A royal fantasy (cf. 1.2–4,12; 3.6–11). 10: The man's words or words he puts in the mouth of the queens and other royal wives (here translated “concubines”). 11–12: I went down to the nut orchard, either the man's words or a short interruption of his speech by the woman, since in v. 13 she is asked to return. 12: The verse is corrupt and untranslatable. 13: Shulammite, not a proper name; possibly meaning “the perfect one,” it evokes the name “Solomon” (Heb “Shelomoh”). We, the man and the women of Jerusalem. A dance before two armies, the meaning of the phrase is obscure. 7.1: Your rounded thighs are like jewels probably refers to the curves of hips or thighs as resembling ornaments of some type. 2: Parts of the body not normally exposed to view are described in metaphors that are not transparent. Perhaps navel is a euphemism for “vulva.” Heap of wheat suggests the softness and gentle curve of the woman's stomach. 4: The image evokes the gracefulness of a long neck. Your eyes are pools, the same Hebrew word, “ʿayin,” means both “eye” and “spring.” Heshbon, east of Jerusalem in Transjordan, where excavations have revealed the remains of a large reservoir, dating from the ninth to eighth centuries bce. The location of Bath-rabbim, meaning “daughter of many,” is unknown. Perhaps the significance of Lebanon has to do with its scent; cf. 4.11n. 5: The comparison to Mount Carmel, which overlooks the Mediterranean Sea at Haifa, suggests the stately way she holds her head. Locks are like purple, shiny black hair has a purple sheen. Purple, the color of royalty, evokes rich and luxurious hair, suitable for capturing a king. 7–9: I say I will climb, i.e., “I intend to climb.” The man puts himself in the picture (cf. 5.1), and, through a series of images, moves closer to the object of his desire. First he must climb the tall palm tree to reach its clusters that represent his lover's breasts (v. 7). Then, envisioned as grape clusters (v. 8), her breasts become more accessible.
7.10–13: The woman's reply. The man's second long speech, like his first, gives rise to the woman's invitation to love (cf. 4.16). 11: Villages, the same Hebrew word also means “henna bushes,” preferable here because of the outdoor setting. 13: Mandrakes were thought by some to be an aphrodisiac.
8.1–14: A montage of short speeches. 1–4: The woman speaks of her desire. 3–4: Cf. 2.6–7. 5a: The women of Jerusalem speak about the lovers. 5b: In labor, better, “conceived you.” The woman aroused her lover in a setting where his mother also enjoyed sexual intimacy. 6–7: The only statement in the Song about the nature of love in general. The poet places these words in the mouth of the woman, who speaks to the man not, as she has until now, about their love, but about love itself. 6: She wants to be intimately and permanently close to him, like a seal he might wear. Seals made of precious or semiprecious metal or stone could be worn on a necklace or a bracelet for the wrist or upper arm, or a signet ring. Love is strong as death, not stronger. Their struggle to possess the same object (the loved one) is illustrated in the rivalry between their counterparts, passion (more precisely, “jealousy”) and the grave (Heb “Sheol,” the abode of the dead). 8–12: The lovers speak in similitudes about themselves and their beloved. 8–10: Unlike the girl in her example, for whom preparations will be made when she reaches marriageable age, the woman asserts that she needs no such arrangements, since she has already surrendered to her lover. 10: In the context of a city under siege (v. 9), to bring peace signifies surrender, and to find peace is to have the offer of surrender accepted (Deut 20.10–11; Josh 9.15; 11.19). 11–12: The man compares his vineyard (the woman; see 1.6n.) to Solomon's: it is more valuable and he alone will tend it. Baal-hamon, no such place is known; meanings of the name, “owner of wealth” or “husband of a multitude,” suggest that it was chosen to emphasize Solomon's privileged status. 13–14: The poet does not bring the Song to a proper close, so that the love it celebrates can remain unending. 13: Let me hear it, the man's words send us back to the beginning of the Song, where we hear the woman's voice, speaking of her desire. 14: Make haste, the Hebrew word indicates movement away from the speaker. Mountains of spices, an erotic image for the woman herself; see 2.17; 4.6. As in 2.17, the woman appears to be sending her lover away and calling him to her at the same time. The effect is to leave love forever in progress, for only when the woman seems to send her lover away can the poem begin again with longing and the quest to gratify desire.
a Meaning of Heb uncertain
b Heb crocus
a Or on the mountains of Bether; meaning of Heb uncertain
b Gk: Heb lacks this line
a Meaning of Heb uncertain
b Or Look
a Meaning of Heb uncertain
a Meaning of Heb uncertain
b Heb lapis lazuli
a Cn: Meaning of Heb uncertain
b Ch 7.1 in Heb
c Or dance of Mahanaim
d Meaning of Heb uncertain
e Syr: Heb in delights
f Heb This your stature is
a Heb palate
b Heb down for my lover
c Gk Syr Vg: Heb lips of sleepers
d Gk Syr: Heb my mother; she (or you) will teach me
a Or finds